Holy flipping fudge this is amazing. Your writing is almost lyrical I love it! Lemme keep reading haha
Wow!! I loved it! Its really different than the other stories I have read. It drags your attention from the very first sentence and on.
Nice... Always nice to have originality and I like your similies. They paint visual images which are important and always nice to have :)
this is so intense i might pee myself. youre one of the best! you should read the pilot to my series and tell me whatcha think! thank you (:
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