O.O Whoa. Mind blown~ Definitely will have to keep up with this one! It's interesting already. xP Haha~
love this story amazing could you give my sample a read comment please anyway how you make the cover for your book everyone else can but me.
Good stuff:) I like how you created the tension and used powerful words to describe the scene and the characters! I agree with Deep 4141! Lol great work:)
This is a great start, it really pulls you in. I love the names by the way; you have an awesome imagination! Really sorry it took so long to get back to you :\
It's certainly a good start, draws you in very nicely indeed. Pacy and nicely written. Well worth a vote, good stuff. Gav
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