This is amazing! The detail you put in is fab!!!!! Currently up to chapter 4 part 2!!!!!! :)
i was rooting for the woman :) im only on the first page, so... i guess ill have to see if she makes it or not. good story, though, very nice!!
This is pretty good. Thanks for sharing it. Might want to correct centimeters though. Haha.
Gotta agree Youve done a greattt job at the descriptionss =D Nice work gonna carry on reading now =]
you're a great writer and i love the name Aleria! :) you really pull me into the stroy and it has a great plot! overall good job!
This is great writing- I love the description and the way you word everything so smoothly. The words just flow.
(Amy the Ostrich Breeder)
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