Baby's Breath
peak - 6:Fantasy, 13: short story....
People are reading, and telling me it's fantastic, and not voting...So please keep voting (if you really like it) because it's really slipping dow now :(
Thanks! :)
QUICK NOTE: This is a COMPLETE short story, not an intro or the first chapter. It requires some analysis and a bit of thinking on thr reader's part. If you don't understand the story, try reading again...or look through the comments (though I have given away what it is really about in the description anyway, so sorry if you are still confused).
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A short story about miscommunication between a mother and child written like a fairytale to mask the sadness. Baby's breath may look and sound pretty, but she's just a representation of the relationship between a single mother and her son.
Recent Comments
purpletwx
I loved the depth of this story. I also like how simple this story is and the length. You did an awesome job :)
While I didn't fully understand it-I'm no good at reading depth in stories-I enjoyed it all the same Very good :)
This is fantastic writing. Your writing flowed well. Everything is in place for a good story. The actual story just needs to hook me more.
This is Ah-Mazing!:) You are a great writer, SO keep writing!!:) haha This is a really good short story! :)
it is good though i didnt find anything amazing. but i should praise for presenting an ordinary thing in an extraordinary way.. keep it up.
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