It's Complicated
Jake Connor lives a normal life in the dorm where he lives as an orphan (But don't tell anyone that. He hates the sympathy.). You can say he's a player or a ladies' man. He doesn't really care just as long as he gets the babes which, more often than not, he does. The pain of the past is behind him and all he's looking forward to is the next la--date with another hot chick. It just so happens that one of them triggers something in him and he gets these visions of the fire that killed his family. It was said to be an accident. As the vision persists (for it is just one, getting clearer and clearer) , he finds it isn't so.
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lstornelli27
A flawless chapter. And very unique, must I say. I haven't read anything like this and I liked it. You did a great job and I'll be reading more!
Really good opening, hooked us right in for a good story;) Can't wait to read more!!!!:D
You have an interesting structure to your writing. It is oddly formal in a way. I like it.
Voted :) I like the way you write, everything's really tense and this seems like a great start Good job!
Good Prologue so far! :D Keep on writin! Thanks for sharing this in my discussion :)
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