@Tezialee yes, you generally get 'punters' in pubs, strip clubs and things, like in a restaurant or at HMV you wouldn't be a punter, you'd be a customer :)
Sorry if it's a stupid question but what is a punter? Is it another term for customer?
it was really good please can you carry one writin gother books like these
i can't wait to read more
@Beastie when your in love you think there perfect. It is in his P.O.V so he is going think she is perfect it's just his view on her.
Everything about this story points to your main character being a Mary Sue, aka. too perfect, boring, generic and predictable.
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