I don't usually read fantasy stories but you've got me hooked! Good vocabulary, the story flows smoothly, all in all, it's great =D
Excellent writing. I love Fantasy, and your writing style makes the story flow smoothly.
wow good start.I love this flashback[I think it is a flashback:o]I like the words used too.Great effort in writing.Go on!
PERFECT start! Gosh, this is so good...;-; Your such a great writer! I can't help but realise that your words are awesome! :D
This is a really great start it made me want to keep in and help. It had the suspense to make me crave more!( reading on~)
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