I like the cover :D It's a good story, I really like Sari's mum haha :D And I really like Sari :)
Bravo! I love cover!!! It's very pretty. I loved the emotion you put in when talking about her friends. It gave her true animation in my mind!
This is good. I can tell she misses her friends a lot and the descriptions didn't make me want to just skim them and move on.
It's really fantastic! I love your style of writing and the flow is just perfect. Very original and very interesting! Fantastic!
Incredible writing! and btw I love Zooey Deschanel and I think she really fits your main character! xD
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