Amazing prologue. Your descriptions flowed and your wording was spectacular. I think the ending line was what got me though.
Fabulous start - I'm hooked right in, wanting to find out what happens to him. Great tension building.
This is amazing, I'm a little at a loss for words, but that means I really do love it!
I only just finished the first chapter and I'm already addicted! You are an absolutely AMAZING writer, one of the best I've seen in a very long time!
I had to staRt readi g as soon as you said that it. Like the hunger games meets the matrix haha
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