this is really good i like how you start off with a bible verse it adds a little extra jazz to it def keep writing i like your style
GRANDPA? what an eff'd up family! That said, LOVE IT! makes an interesting story. Post soon!
again super sorry about the comments, but this story is really good! keep it upppp! voted!
Holy wow, this is pretty amazing. I think you should add more to this and quickly :) Very deep for being a short chapter.
O_o . Poor Grandpa :P This is good though, very well written ! ^__^ Continue soon or else (;
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