You have a great writing style that draws me in. Great descriptions too that fill my head with a spectacular picture :) This was a great read!
Great description in the first few paragraphs! I love the panic you bring in in the last paragraph, you tie us (the readers ) to the story very well!
Interesting idea! I agree with everyone that it was very descriptive! & nice ending, I wonder what happens next!
You have an amazing way of descriping the scene the rain and the tree was fantastic and this is a really interesting plot,
Amazing descriptions of the tree, and of the rain. Literally... I felt like I was her, and could feel everything. :)
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