hey, the writing style of this is simply fantastic! your paragraphs have great structure and it's detailed amazingly!
Herma is so cute. I normally read historical fiction about wars so this is a fresh idea for me. You obviously write well and know your stuff. Reading on!
Fantastic! the story plot was easy to understand and your grammar was superb! on to the next chapter ^^
Wow, thats a very unique plot(: And you have very nice grammar. Better then a lot of peoples! Haha.
Great start!! The plot is original and starting to become interesting =] Great detail and your description is perfect!
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