I really love this story! I'm so excited to get to read thru the whole entire thing!
I do agree with @spacefreak92 @Sakuramiracles your vocabulary is fantastic. I also love the fact that you added the bacon thing. It's really silly.
You're vocabulary is so amazing and it really sets up an epic atmosphere, I love it. Everything is paced amazingly also voted!
This story is absolutely amazing!! Your talent is great and the description is awesome!! Great work:D
hey same as HeBrokeMyHeart I commented a while ago I had the same user name and everything but I will still consider you in the contest
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