I love Ashalynn's name, it's so pretty :D I really liked the story and the action. Voting & will be staying updated!
I love it its hard to find stories that keep you insterested the story or chapter and that's what you did oh and sorry it took me so long to read it
Voted, fan, added to my library, and voted for in watty awards!! I absoutly love it! Good luck in the Watty Awards
A great start! Awesome action....lol :) Very descriptive, and you are really great with spelling and grammar :D
Wow this is really good you give so much description and the fight scene was good didn't expect them to have powers
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| Name | Dakota |
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| Member Since | Mar 14, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 2,536 |