Hi Mojo, This looks like a promising story, but be careful, some parts look as if your fingers were struggling to keep up with your thoughts, :)
the story was a little hard to get into but im glad i stuck it out seems to pick up after the prologe.seems to b well written and an in.teresting story.
Great start, I like the whole water-world/space/sci-fi theme. Your plot is very interesting. I'm hoping Celine rises up against the Council :3
I love a good action packed story and this is looking good so far. Add to the mix that it's sci-fi and I'm sure to read on.
@Mojo_Smileyface Yes, I'm back, lol. If you're around, I have something I'd like to talk to you about, if you wouldn't mind jumping on the chat.
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