I like this so far.:) I think you have created two good characters and your writing has a nice flow to it.:) well done.:) voted,:)
aww so cute I was reading and I thought there was another page to this chapter i literally said "AAAWWWWUUHHH!"
awwww that was such a cute way to open this story:)...and i like were its headed:)....happy to be reading!!
I love it (; you really shouldnt worry about how you write its really good! ((((:
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| Name | ↳Shax↲ |
| Location | The Medusa Cascade |
| Birthday | Feb 16 |
| Member Since | Sep 25, 2010 |
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