great start :) i've added this to both my accounts, the other is SmokeyEyesMwah, where i usually do all my reading :) cant wait to read one :)
I normally hate wolf stories but this ones pretty good. To start it off telling the story of the dads sacrifice was very smart. It sure captured my attention.
Its a bit rough around the edges. Nothing a quick edit wouldn't help. Good start and i'm likin' your idea so far. Keep it up (:
You need to watch your spacing. And this storyline sounds cute and interesting. Just make sure to edit :)
your summary gives too much away. there'd be no point in reading your story since you've already told us what happens in your summary.
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