Learn To Reverse (Formally, Fighting Alpha) Editing. Do not read!

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UnderdogM By UnderdogM Updated 11 months ago
The day that I was taken, my life shattered. Mercy had been stolen from her life years ago, but when she escapes and finds a home, the prospect of actually living again comes into view, especially when she meets Rage. But opposing forces threaten to once more tear her life apart. Mercy must learn to Reverse.
CuzImAwesome CuzImAwesome 2 years ago
Honestly it was a teensy bit over dramatic. But thats probably what I would be thinking in that situation so its all good. Other than that, it makes me want to see how she grew up to be. On to the next chapter!
NewBornChild NewBornChild 2 years ago
I agree with many others. You have a captivating start, although it is somewhat already used by other writers. But that's good because you have the challenge: be better! :) Going to keep reading now
TriaTheCraziestDuo TriaTheCraziestDuo 2 years ago
great start :)  i've added this to both my accounts, the other is SmokeyEyesMwah, where i usually do all my reading :) 

cant wait to read one :)
happylife18 happylife18 2 years ago
well i don't usually read wolf stories so i don't know how these stories work. there were just a few incorrect spellings and just add more emotions to the writing. other than that everything is good :)
Rebelx_xRosie Rebelx_xRosie 2 years ago
This story sounds a lot like some of the other stories on wattpad. I hope it will become more original in future chapters, because it did grab my attention. It probably has to do with your writing, which was good. I noticed a few minor errors, but nothing too disturbing.
Lost2wolves Lost2wolves 2 years ago
I think this is better than anything I've written! I like it!