i like the first chapter... even if its the "crappiest" starts you've ever written... XD
whats with the random harry potter trailer:L? but good start! dont be so hard on yourself, your a good writer:) seren12<3!
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| Name | Amrit Gill |
| Location | Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry |
| Member Since | Apr 17, 2011 |
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