I like the end " sorry guys got to get ready for school" that's the shit I like B-)
OMG!!! That was great but next time im not saying this in a bad way but next time plz make sence plz
Renesmee I really really like your name ...... It's really cool.. and your story is very nice its just the grammar...
its very hard to read! sorry but the grammer is HORRIBLE, you should have someone edit it for you.
Very good story!:) Even though i had trouble reading the grammer i just loved this story. I wish it was longer.PLease make another!
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