This was a really good short story: well done! :) Reallly enjoyed getting to know the characters! :)
Great Job Michael! An excellent description of a difficult situation and how the best of intentions go awry. He should write more!
Very nice story! Well written. I love how it was like an old school break in with the modern twist haha. & poor guy =(
I feel so bad that his mom called the cops after he spent all that time trying to help!
What's the learning disability? I have Asperger Syndrome. I could understand what you're grandson is going through. And this is pretty good.
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