My Beloved (sample, getting published Dec. 28th 2014)

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mamie1990 By mamie1990 Updated 6 months ago
She gave me life again. She is the my entire purpose on breathing. Her blood calls out to me like a siren that I cannot ignore. Who is she you ask? Why, she is My Beloved.
this sounds a lot like a story called beloved that I read a while ago
Some of the writing is stiff and awkward, but all in all I like it so far.
what we need to do is to inform her parents and tell her that her daughter got lost and went to their school. just so they can bring her back to her kindergarten
I hate those kind of people! They ruin the whole mood man!!!!!!!!!
I love pokemon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I also agree with you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Smiley face!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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                                    ohmygod i think that hes gonna live cos of those few drops, and because she took all the silver