I love it! It was written and styled beautifully and I understood. I understood everything. Job well done, Sir. Jolly good job well done.
It's really good it lets everything out nothing to hide and that's really good :)
Beautifully naked reality, i liked your note at the beginning, i feel the same about poetry..... I voted as this one is lovely, thanks for sharing! :-)
"Suddenly free/Was it meant to be/Can it be real?/CAN I STILL FEEL?" Love your writing man. You are just great with emotions.
Damn. This is a pretty pimpin poem. Gotta say i luv the flow and the style. you aight dawg.
Definitely my favorite,two strong emotions I can Identify in here are love and hope. Very beautiful
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