Bully Me (Completed)

13 Part Story 12.4K Reads 175 Votes
guitarfreak8810 By guitarfreak8810 Completed
Rayne is a high school just trying to make it through - but it makes it difficult when she's picked on daily. She's always caught in the wrong place at the wrong time. The bullies: her own sister Topaz, her sister's boyfriend Will, and her sister's best friend Andrew. It seems like a never ending cycle to her and that's just the way it is- she will always be the victim. But some bullies are also victims...
o_Skittlez_o o_Skittlez_o 5 months ago
i cant pronounce his last name right, ive just been saying avocado this whole time xD
AmyGarcia6 AmyGarcia6 3 years ago
Its so perfect u should keep going. . I love the askibg alexandria shirt but it very good
WinterChill WinterChill 4 years ago
Oh, and I like the chapter names....at least this one makes since if you think of about it figuratively :D Like how her life is fog, or even when Drew and Steven show up and how she knew it was them even if it were foggy outside :D I really like your writing style!
WinterChill WinterChill 4 years ago
This didn't seem unrealistic at all to me. I'm sure there are plenty of people out there that have been bullied this severely and you do a very good job at getting across the different emotions that are running throughout this story. Good Job!
Lol5679 Lol5679 4 years ago
I've been bullied quite a bit in my life so the bullying aspect really spoke to me. Good start! Voted :D
VanessaMarie VanessaMarie 4 years ago
I really love this! Iwas bullied my whole life and the dedication means alot:) Im going to keep reading this