I can't believe someone managed to write a story about Halo. Good work! haha, this is great.
woah! I was shocked at how detailed you are!!! its a really great beginning :D Voted!
Never played the game, but this is pretty sweet... nicely written, and I'm interested to see where this goes :)
Hey nice first draft well done. I love how the characters develop as the story progresses.
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