Saccharine
Amidst the evil of his kingdom, he finds her standing alone like an untouched flower, and he feels instantly that he'd love to see her withered. And so, he appears like an angel before what seems like a precious doll, but in the land of the forsaken, nothing is as it seems.
There are only honeyed lies and saccharine smiles to be found here, but something wicked is brewing.
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Really great first chapter, you have a very nice writing style which immediately pulled me into the story and keeps me wanting to read more.
this is very interesting and it caught my attention, will be continuing on with the story :) *
A very engaging beginning, some good writing and descriptions. i want to read more! *
*This is very compelling. I thoroughly enjoyed it & rightly so you hold a contest on a good first chapter when yours is so amazing!! Very good!
Okay this is really good!!!!! But it's sooo creepy!!!! hahah!!! It's really good!!! :)
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