First there shouldn't be cussing and two there shouldn't be any talk about alcohol and other "STUFF" other then that i liked it
This reminds me of another story. I'm not sure what story. But I love it, and great writing. :D
Hi Lady - I had to read all the way through first, my stomach was just in too many knots to stop and comment! Great chapter, Fantastic Writing!
I like jay.... :s Just trying to be awkward there haha
Love your stories though!
I liked the twist in the end, although I think it could've been better. Nice story though.
Haha I love you! 'operation attain rio'! :) I can always read your stories and they'll make my day!
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