valiant_ valiant_ 2 years ago
It's alright, but it's too straight forward. Give something to think about, give us CONTEXT so the readers can judge weather or not we think you're 'good enough'. Otherwise it just sounds like a rant that rhymes.
xXXovertureXXx xXXovertureXXx 2 years ago
it seems like im reading about myself,the thoughts that go on in my head,love it <3
" Am I good enough for myself?" that single question has taken over me
Very understandable. I'm sure everyone has felt like this - These things floating through their minds.
Navy0511 Navy0511 2 years ago
I always ask myself does questions.  I really help to know I am not the only one.   I really liked it:)
GavinGeiger GavinGeiger 2 years ago
truly amazing, for me it sort of reminds me about the struggles that we normally have in our live with god. anyways sounds awesome dude!