ROAD TO NOWHERE
Short story.
A one page thriller about two girls on the run.
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EmAngster00
This is great... It would be great if you re wrote it into a novel :) keep on writing! -J
It was quite good. You can continue the story for sure, I would have loved to read how the adventure unfolds! :)
I like the freedom theme. That readers are interested to see what happens next shows you've outdone yourself. Very good.
Interesting idea... the plan seemed to go a little too smoothly though, so I never felt like your characters were in any real danger.
you should make more chapters and pages because i think you got something going here Aside from that i think that it is really good
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