hey zoohi ur story is great seriously i do like dont worry about it. p.s. chick out girl :p
I love how you put the story into Nessie's point of view. It will definitely be more interesting that way! :D you're off to a good start! hehe
I totally agree with @dogpower77, But the plot sounds alright ((: Keep going ((: xxx
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