Absolutely beautiful. I did that this year after reading Romeo and Juliette in English. Mine was about valentines day and I think I got maybe an 80
I actually like it as "Loosing it all," but that's jsut cause I think I see a double meaning. :)
Very nice. I like the word choice here even more and the flow is better. I think this one comes more naturally.
yet i could not say it is a sonnet.
check the rythmic pattern of a sonnet.
but i do really like the message!
Ok, here's about as critical as I get. You probably meant "Losing it all" (one "o")?
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