Wow, this is so well written and has an amazing story line. I can't find anything to critique about. GREAT JOB!!
Great intro! It really does make you think about the future. Anyway, I voted and am reading on (:
Love the quote in the beginning. I love this prologue. Very interesting. Reading on!
Very, very good!! You have really piqued my interest!!
I'll read on!!
Oh, I voted!!
Oh wow this is really really good! And even better you have so much uploaded!!!! Voting voting voting!
I like it! You have a very good taste in names ;)
keep updating the story, i'll be sure to check in every chapter you write!
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