i really like the western movies. Your story is really good i can easily picture it
This soundsike an I incredible and unique story, but it's unfortunately not my cup of tea. Sorry:/ keep writing!
Wow! Great Job! you got me hooked before the end of page 1! A great beginning "voted" :)
I like how you put their accent into the dialogue! I especially like the descriptive writing!
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