Nicee Job! I love your story! I love Echo's name, its unusual like mine(: You've done a great job and I can't wait to read more from you!!!
maybe a little toning down is needed... but not too much:) @dreamsofrain good job with this btw
Wow a lot of cussing... sorry just noticed that uu have a cuss word in about every paragraph... anyways good job:)
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