Lucifer's Ring

8 Part Story 6.1K Reads 130 Votes
PureOfHeart By PureOfHeart Updated a year ago
All Estelle Atkins wants to do is leave her home and never come back. Her father is controlling, her mother is gone, and a mysterious man has been following her ever since her 16th birthday. After disobeying her father for the last time, he decides to send her away to her Aunt and Uncle’s in a small town called Painswick. Estelle sees this as a chance to finally break free and escape her problems back home. She learns dating tips from her soon-to-be married cousin, gets to explore the town freely and begins to feel as if she is a normal person like everyone else. But what do you do when the issues you try so hard to escape haunt you wherever you go?
RenaFlower77 RenaFlower77 3 years ago
The tittle is confusing but it was cool. I must admit when I read your first chapter I wasn't going to think this would suit me but as I kept reading I come to enjoy it. I shall contintue to do so.
RenaFlower77 RenaFlower77 3 years ago
nice start. got my attention. I shall put your story in my library and so I can keep reading it ^^
ESummerLee ESummerLee 3 years ago
Very good, the setting is well thought of and everythign si written pretty well. I'm voting :)
ESummerLee ESummerLee 3 years ago
Oh, thats a good prologue, very short but still intriguing. (I'm obviously reading on xD)
TheGrammarNazi TheGrammarNazi 3 years ago
AAAH i think im in love.! Great job with this, I HAVE to read more :)) lovelovelove this! Definitely adding it to my library and fanning :)
TheGrammarNazi TheGrammarNazi 3 years ago
I love it! Hahaha that's not really cheesy.. Sometimes when I write I feel cheesy too but then when other people read it its not bad lol