Oh wow this is an amazing first chapter. I really like how you describe things and I also love the name Addalyn.
Okay -- easily one of the best pages I have read on WP. The Dialogue between Addalynn and Makena is my favorite part. I am curious about her age. Voted!
Omg this reminded me of Sabrina the teenage witch. with Salem the cat!!! aww i reminder the cartoons. :D this is amazing already!
Congratutions, for creating and writing with putting in great effort in this very novel. It is excellent in its English Vocabulay. WELL DONE!!! - Agy :')
This was really good. :D The descriptions are so detailed that I truly feel like I am inside the book. You are a brilliant writer.
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| Name | Alexandra Corinth |
| Location | Dallas, TX |
| Birthday | Jul 27 |
| Member Since | Jul 03, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 1,494 |