I really like the description you put in. I like how Gabe recognizes her ! I'm hooked! x
this is good ! i like the description in you writing and how you started off the story with them meeting again :)
First paragraph is promising :) The interaction between the two characters is quite cute :') Will keep reading
this was a good start humorist and well written detailed the dialog flowed and was entertaining
Oh my gosh. This was an epic start. Yay a Chinese person!! :D I totally know how she feels... lol hi @janefoxx xD
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