This is great, i usually don't like or get poetry that much, but i got this and loved it. Good job!
hey sorry it took me so long...This is really good! I shall vote on it and recommend it to my poetry circle of friends!
nice... the only part that confused me a bit was "We our one and we kill ourselves because" did you mean to use "our" or was it something else?
You've really captured the truth and I really like what I read..Keep inspiring us with your writing..
This is so true! I love it. We ARE afraid, and I think it may have something to do with technology! We don't TALK anymore. Very well written.
I like that it's so true of life and people, keep up the good work, vote cast for you.
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