2 Part Story 4.7K Reads 175 Votes
JPKent By JPKent Completed
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InvisibleDreamer InvisibleDreamer 3 years ago
This has like got to be my favorite from your poems so far <3 :) lol
tencats tencats 4 years ago
This is great, i usually don't like or get poetry that much, but i got this and loved it. Good job! 
kevinsubliminal kevinsubliminal 4 years ago
nice work........would love it if the poems I have on here had half the readers this one has.........anyone know of any poetry contests coming up?  wouldn't mind hearing some feedback on the three poems I have on here........cheers
owleyes owleyes 4 years ago
hey sorry it took me so long...This is really good! I shall vote on it and recommend it to my poetry circle of friends!
eltuzer eltuzer 4 years ago
nice... the only part that confused me a bit was "We our one and we kill ourselves because" did you mean to use "our" or was it something else?
StarGazerXD StarGazerXD 4 years ago
You've really captured the truth and I really like what I read..Keep inspiring us with your writing..