Ok I've read the whole first chapter now, I really like it, mad amounts of tension, I like your writing style
Nice Jamilla. Twisted, but enjoyable. Can't wait for till I read the read the rest. So far it's good!
yeh. Then you successfully executed and created a false sense of security for her. Made me feel really bad for her :\
SO im captivated, the way you write really makes a reader addicted to your books, the story is harmlessly dangerous, not a bad job, not bad at ALL. :)
Well.. obviously it was icky at parts but the actual writing of it was very good. You go into so much detail. .... I hope that guy is caught soon.
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