Dew of the Sea (On Hold)

7 Part Story 2.7K Reads 79 Votes
SmilelyTaylor By SmilelyTaylor Updated 3 years ago
"Through the storm and seas, they live happily ever after together... Forever. The end" mother finished. 

"Oh, please one more time, mother! Just once more." I begged with big puppies eyes. 

"No No, dearest. You must go to bed, you have a big day ahead of you" mother said standing up. 

"Fine... but promise me you'll tell me it tomorrow night then?"

"Always, dearest. It's my favorite story too!" she answered reaching for the light, "Now goodnight Rosemary."

I heard the ocean crash against the rocks through my shut window. Mother says my name, Rosemary, means 'Dew of the sea or The Sea' and ever since I was born, I can hear it talking. He is my best friend, but when I don't come out to play, He becomes very anger. His waves become towers, and he tends to cry at night. If I'm too far away from him, I grow weak but if I'm close to Him, I am very strong. 

The story mother was just telling me, is my favorite and it's about a little girl. She is sixteen years old and lives in a Water Tribe. She talks to the water and is able to control it. I am not able to do that; instead, He talks to me and controls me. I know mother is skipping parts of the story. I can feel it, plus He tells me. I ask him to tell me the whole story, but he refuses. I need to learn those parts, and that's where my adventures start. 

With one more crash against the rocks, I close my eyes, and whisper "Goodnight, friend."
OOH, when are you going to continue? :3 Soo eager to know! : )
i like it it is reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaallllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyy good 
I liked it..keep writing don't give up on this one!...mosty writers tend to give up on good stories ^.^
It's pretty good :) I like the title and the prologue was awesome :D 

My tip: Thoroughly proof read before posting so everything makes sense ^_^
This is totally amazing! Yup Ti Ti you shall have to upload more or I shall come and kick your ass! No joke :P :D
I like the idea of this. It seems like it's going to be a really unique and interesting read. I'd say it's more adventure than fantasy though. For the title, I read your synopsis in the gray box...how about 'Dew of the Sea' as the title? I like this. Keep writing!  :)

-Nadie Rae <3