Bloody Elements!!
Some say that fire is the most powerful element on Earth. What would happen if the master of that element comes back into power after centuries, when he was captured into a different world in return for his cruel intentions of creating a dead army?
Grott Roberts was just an ordinary teenager. Carefree, fun-loving and popular. But when a huge thunderstorm hits the town and Grott barely manages to escape with his best friend, he meets a shy and mysterious girl who introduces them to a whole new world buried way beyond their imagination. What would happen if Grott came to know that life isn't all fun and games, when there is an ancient prophecy awaiting to be fulfilled in order to destroy a centuries old curse that has lingered secretly in the human world? How would he react to the fact that achieving his aim could also end up costing him much more than expected, his life.
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Seirance
Sorry *pauses for a moment* but can i say that the pic at the side there is just awesome? What does it represent in this story actually?
Wow...I love how professional you write...this really drew me in to want to know more.. : ))
ur prologue is quite good i dont see anything wrong with it and ill keep reading u keep writing
@Viz20RobertFanNatic oh. i see. by the way, you're prologue is done good. keep it up. ^_^
A few mistakes here and there, such as starting your sentence with "Or". All in all a decent concept, but a predictable plot. -So I continue to read-
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