You should add the "" things when they talk. That way it's easier to understand :)
I love how it starts. It leaves me in suspense. This is awesome for a first time!!
Hi, I have just fallen in love with this story and I need more. Please update soon.
i like it :) you're doing a good job writing hope yah update as soon as possible for you
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