If I Could

1 Part Story 40 Reads 1 Votes
SpringDrizzle By SpringDrizzle Updated 3 years ago


                

                
Hey!! :) This is a great short story. I felt the emotion and even though I didn't really got what was going on right away I wanted to read on. There is just one thing I noticed; in the first paragraph you wrote expect and I think you mean "except" :)