My friend I have not enjoyed your story
I LOVED IT!
Get it published, it is a very good YA or fantasy!
WAIT LUCIFER MEANING DEVIL! WTF! AND BAAL< NICKNAMED BALLS< WAS A PAGAN GOD JEWS HATED> WELL IM NOT JEWISH SO I REALLY DONT CARE ABOUT THE BAAL PART!
I like how your developing the main character to be something much more in the future.
I am a big fan of fantasy and i think the desciption of this world is amazing. I cant wait til the next upload.
what the hell this is soooooo good! did u make it up if so amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Im loving the book. I have been looking forward to each update. plz keep up the good work
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