@Veritable I agree with you.
Although @rosebloomblack this is a very lovely poem!
i thought it was beautiful of how you put of two that are in love and how they fit together
very very down to earth (: for me it lacked density, but thts just me :p i like the relatable message and story it was perfectly drawn out (: voted!
This is really good!!! i love the emotion in it!! it makes the reader realize like what u mean if that makes sense :P
Good poem! Good job! I noticed a typo though! "Because THEY need each other" You have forgotten the 'y' =)
Wow you are such an amazing writer! You can really connect to what the writer (you) is going through, please keep writing, no matter what! :)
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