With My Last Breath(Rewriting)
Andrea is like any girl her age. She is looking for her true love. She never thought she would find it until she met Jaocb Giddian. He was everything that she wanted. Their lives were perfect until the floor dropped from underneath their feet and Andrea's heart and world shattered to pieces. When she thought all hope was lost and she was close to losing herself she ran into Zak Buchanan. He tried to fix her shattered heart, but when some local girls are murdered, Andrea starts getting little notes around the house. GET OUT! YOUR NEXT! Who is sending these notes? Why do they want her?
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Skielar
I thought you could have separated the paragraphs a little more, otherwise it's a good start so far!
@xImprintedx I hope your not mad or anything, I just feel like you can really bring out an amazing story and i want to encourage you to do so.
This is a really good beginning, kinda sad, but a great start none the less! When I get on my computer I will defiantly vote! *adding to library and fanning*
It's a good beginning in that it shows her beginning and where she's come from. Its not the happiest, but it works. =)
That must have been so hard to put your own mother into a mental institution. This is really good so far. I will keep reading up on this one :P
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