Hooked! Omgosh. Why are you even reading my stuff, yours is FANTASTIC. :D I hope you own face in the Wattys!
I like how it started with the script. It made the start of the actual story a surprise.
Yet again, your work is beautifully written, easy to read, and intriguing. This, I tell you, is talent. I hope you get your works published one day :)
This is really good. I love the discriptin - I could clearly see everything! Reading on and voting!
Salina, Salina not sure about her character yet...but i'm tuning in to see the next dimension of her...
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| Name | Shea Ryhai |
| Location | Wonderland |
| Member Since | May 11, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 6,363 |