Hmmm..maybe just work a little bit more on description? But, besides that your story is great so far! Keep writing..x)
I really like it! The characters are fresh and interesting and the plot moves along quite nicely
I really like it! And Mr. Simons is a total jerk! (Well duh...) I had a teacher like that but then he got fired....
I really like the humor you put in here, and the intro really wants people to read more. :D
I explained with* a smile I liked how you started off with her talking to herself and all that, it puts us in the atmosphere of it .
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| Name | A H Dennis |
| Location | England, UK |
| Member Since | Feb 04, 2011 |
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