Good descriptive love the characters and love how you explained the scenery! good job
That's a great start off! Well written and goes on smoothly. There's good exposure of emotions and can barely affect readers. Great work!
It's good, there weren't any mistakes and it's mysterious which makes readers want to continue.
Good story, everybody below has some great points.... Good read keep writing voted.
I love fantasy! sooo much! Thank you for sharing in my discussion! A definite vote! :) Love the cover! :D
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