Born To Serve?

When Charlotte Smithfield is dismissed from her job as a servant she is sent on a journey she never wants to take. A journey into a land of hard labour and people whom she cannot trust. Join this sixteen year old victorian girl as she delves into a eerie and haunting world whilst trying to uncover her past and what has caused her to question everything. But be warned, this is not a tale for the faint-hearted!!
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I really like the word choice you use, it's different and definitley a ket part that makes this story work x)
Beautifully written for the era and fitting for the characters you've created.  It's nice to read an original story and enjoying it so far! :) <33
Ooo...  Really gripping and full of suspence.  Love your vocab - it's nice to see some 'big' words now and again!  Reading on... :)
Wow! Really great vocabulary! It's suspensful and pulls you in. I really like it. (:
This was an interesting start, makes the reader want to go on to find out why she is so nervous. Good job :)
This family is intense and RUDE! I like how your writing style really adds to the Victorian age theme.

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Name Ashleigh
Location Scotland
Birthday Jul 03
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