Wow! Really great vocabulary! It's suspensful and pulls you in. I really like it. (:
This was an interesting start, makes the reader want to go on to find out why she is so nervous. Good job :)
I must say that I am not much of a historical fiction reader but after reading this ^ I might start
Might want to write a summary and maybe space out the paragraphs more:) anyway, written pretty well, and Voted!
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